PonyBoy "The Outsiders"
1. I have light-brown, almost red-hair
2. Greenish-gray eyes
3.My hair is longer than a lot of boys.
4.I like to watch movies undisturbed
5.treating me as if i was six instead of fourteen
6. I was wishing i looked like paul Newman he is tough and i don´t
7.I wish they were more gray, because I hate most of they guys that have green eyes
8.I am a greaser
9.I stay out of trouble as much as we can,
10."digs movies and books"
Hi Loreto;
ReplyDeleteNumbers and lists are ok. We really need you in particular, to write descriptive sentences as part of a paragraph. You are past writing numbered lists aren´t we? They are easy. There is nothing wrong with what you have written, it is simply too easy for you.
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